2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last
pitch.
Well one of the
commentator of my previous elevator pitch noted that I should try to use a visual
to help relate with my audience. Unfortunately, I used my phone to record the pitch.
One thing I did make sure to do was to describe more in detail and captivate my audience. Another thing was my pitch was shorter but more concise and to
the point. I am really paralleling my business concept with my elevator pitch
essential trying to sell the vision of my idea.
3) What did you change, based
on the feedback?
As stated above I said that my video was
shorter in duration than my previous pitches. The reason why was I wanted my pitch
to be short enough to grasp a person’s attention, clear enough to be heard,
and captivating enough for the person to reason with my idea. When all of this
is combined, the audience sees the same potential you visualize for your idea.
This is what I intended to do.
Juan,
ReplyDeleteIt is nice too see your pitch become a little more concise. Attention is something that is hard to keep so for you to be able to get all of the details out efficiently is a great thing. Good job on getting the assignment done, I know a lot of people tend to skip these because they require the videos.